The bar charts illustrate the changes in the proportion of household owing and renting an accommodation in England and Wales in a 93 year period starting from 1918 to 2011. Overall, there are two general upward and downward trends. The percentage of household in rented houses decreased. Whereas those who owned their residence climbed.
It is clear that in 1918, the majority of renters are nearly 80%. However, there are declined in the next 2 decades at under 70% and plateaued to 1953. After that, the proportion went down in the following year to the lowest point in 2001, at just over 30%. Then, there is a slightly growth to a third by 2011.
Conversely, just over a fifth who owned houses in 1918, and remain stable between 1939 to 1953 approximately at 32%. The numbers of people who rented houses grew steadily to the peak around 68% by 2001 and slightly decreased to two thirds over 10 years. It is interesting that percentage of owners and renters equaled by the middle of the period.
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A great essay.
A great essay.
just one error:
there are declined in the next 2 decades
should be:
they are declined in the next 2 decades
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...oportion of household owing and renting an accommodation in England and Wales in a 93 year perio...
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...f household in rented houses decreased. Whereas those who owned their residence climbed...
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...e who owned their residence climbed. It is clear that in 1918, the majority o...
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Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('growth') instead of another adjective.
... 2001, at just over 30%. Then, there is a slightly growth to a third by 2011. Conversely, ...
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... slightly growth to a third by 2011. Conversely, just over a fifth who owned ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, then, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74285714286 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55199001981 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9577842929 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4545454545 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183294343189 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064051111298 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730333212195 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122877820472 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908635763784 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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