The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries

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The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries.

The bar chart compares the achievement of Olympic medals by twelve countries.

It is clear that the USA has won the highest number of Olympic medals at around 2300. Apart from the USA, there are five countries that won 500-600 medals in the Olympic Games.

The USA has won about 900 gold, 750 silver and 650 bronze medals. The number of gold medals is more than the total number of all colour medals won by any other country but Soviet Union. In addition, the number of medals won by Soviet Union is around 1000 and it is notably lower than half for the figure of the USA. It is worth noting that the numbers of gold medal won by the USA and Soviet Union are both remarkably higher than other medals.

Except for the USA and Soviet Union, there are only four countries -the U.K., France, Germany and Italy that have won more than 500 medals. All of their figures are almost similar. Finally, for all these 12 countries, Japan has won the least number of Olympic medals at 750.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, apart from, except for, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47777777778 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.94875712211 2.65546596893 73% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0838827281 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344320020128 0.215688989381 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163856258688 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110569041147 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250604936139 0.15604864568 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737364319107 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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