Given is a bar chart illustrating the change of 2 industries including IT industry and Service Industry in the UK over the period 8 years since 1992.
In general, it is evident that the data on IT industry and Service industry was an upward trend. Besides, the figure for IT industry was generally higher than that of Service industry.
Concerning IT industry, at the beginning of the period, the data on IT industry was highest, at over 6%. The figure witnessed a fluctuation and a dramatic rise to appximately 15% for the rest of the period.
Regarding Service industry, in 1995, aforementioned industry accounted for 4%, which two thirds of the percentage of IT industry. In next 8 years, there was a steady growth to 8% until 2000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... higher than that of Service industry. Concerning IT industry, at the beginning...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, regarding, third, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 617.0 965.302439024 64% => OK
No of words: 128.0 196.424390244 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8203125 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.36358566101 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86060211032 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5703125 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 189.9 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5852498616 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1428571429 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0490145406255 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025483999573 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306115628584 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0349411008681 0.15604864568 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026683780714 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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