The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar graph shown illustrates the survey of people using mobile phones and landline, in five countries namely ,Canada, us, germany, Denmark, uk, Sweden, and italy.The survey was made among the group of 100 people and found that their are more landline users in canada, us, denmark compared to other countries.
On further exploring the details of the bar graph it is observed that Denmark has highest number of landline users, out of 100 people almost 87 people make use of landlines, and around 82 people make use of mobile phones.Whereas, largest number of mobile phone users and least amount of landline users is found in italy, where out of 100, 90 people make us of mobile phone and about 40 people make use of landlines.
Finally a comparable number of mobile users is found in uk, Sweden, italy, Denmark where number of mobile users are more that 80 and less than or equal to 90 people. And comparable number of landline users is found in Canada, us, germany, uk, Sweden where number of land line users in the range of 50 -65 users.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s and landline, in five countries namely ,Canada, us, germany, Denmark, uk, Sweden...
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Suggestion: The
...germany, Denmark, uk, Sweden, and italy.The survey was made among the group of 100 ...
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... the group of 100 people and found that their are more landline users in canada, us, ...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the highest'.
Suggestion: has the highest
...e bar graph it is observed that Denmark has highest number of landline users, out of 100 p...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...t Denmark has highest number of landline users, out of 100 people almost 87 peopl...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Whereas
...und 82 people make use of mobile phones.Whereas, largest number of mobile phone users a...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the largest'.
Suggestion: , the largest
...people make use of mobile phones.Whereas, largest number of mobile phone users and least ...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...users and least amount of landline users is found in italy, where out of 100, 90 ...
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Line 5, column 357, Rule ID: MAKE_US_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'use'?
Suggestion: use
...italy, where out of 100, 90 people make us of mobile phone and about 40 people ma...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f 100, 90 people make us of mobile phone and about 40 people make use of landline...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...t 40 people make use of landlines. Finally a comparable number of mobile users is ...
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Line 9, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ound in uk, Sweden, italy, Denmark where number of mobile users are more that 80 ...
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Line 9, column 314, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ine users in the range of 50 -65 users.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33561640039 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489130434783 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 22.4926829268 205% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.384469294 43.030603864 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.5 112.824112599 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.0 22.9334400587 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181925476014 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114123221295 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489491118391 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131159627129 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457236410372 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.9 13.2329268293 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.3012195122 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.16 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 11.4329268293 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.9970731707 186% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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