The given bar graph illustrates the percentage of Australian boys and girls who played different kinds of games in australian in 2003. The horizontal axis depicts the sports while proportion is plotted on vertical axis.
Overall, it can be seen that the maximum sports in Australia played by boys.on the hand , the highest percentage of girls loved to play two games ( netball and swimming) during the given year 2003.
To begin with , 25% of girls played netball games as compared to boys 24% more . Whereas , 21% of girls and 13% of boys loved to do swimming in the given year 2003 in Austraila . Moreover, women also played athletic,basketball and tennis which were 6%, 65% and 7% respectively.
Moving further, soccer sport maximum played by boys about 24% and girls participated in this game only a mere 5% in 2003 in austraila. Meanwhile, boys had more played in other games as comparison 8% more than girls . Furthermore, men had equal proportion in cricket and martial arts , 10% considerably
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...illustrates the percentage of Australian boys and girls who played different kind...
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Suggestion: ,
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...centage of girls loved to play two games netball and swimming during the given ye...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng the given year 2003. To begin with , 25% of girls played netball games as co...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...tball games as compared to boys 24% more . Whereas , 21% of girls and 13% of boys ...
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Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...s as compared to boys 24% more . Whereas , 21% of girls and 13% of boys loved to d...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...ming in the given year 2003 in Austraila . Moreover, women also played athletic,ba...
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Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , basketball
...a . Moreover, women also played athletic,basketball and tennis which were 6%, 65% and 7% re...
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Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...r games as comparison 8% more than girls . Furthermore, men had equal proportion i...
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Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...l proportion in cricket and martial arts , 10% considerably
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9880239521 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85592864844 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610778443114 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2576513849 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5555555556 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21514663247 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890197135925 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719453196208 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151059649128 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639321643721 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...illustrates the percentage of Australian boys and girls who played different kind...
^^
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... in Australia played by boys.on the hand , the highest percentage of girls loved t...
^^
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...centage of girls loved to play two games netball and swimming during the given ye...
^^
Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng the given year 2003. To begin with , 25% of girls played netball games as co...
^^
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tball games as compared to boys 24% more . Whereas , 21% of girls and 13% of boys ...
^^
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s as compared to boys 24% more . Whereas , 21% of girls and 13% of boys loved to d...
^^
Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ming in the given year 2003 in Austraila . Moreover, women also played athletic,ba...
^^
Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , basketball
...a . Moreover, women also played athletic,basketball and tennis which were 6%, 65% and 7% re...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...r games as comparison 8% more than girls . Furthermore, men had equal proportion i...
^^
Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...l proportion in cricket and martial arts , 10% considerably
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9880239521 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85592864844 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610778443114 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2576513849 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5555555556 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21514663247 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890197135925 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719453196208 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151059649128 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639321643721 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.