The differences of jobless in rural and city areas over a year is showed in the line chart.
Overall, The idle in both areas showed some changes, and jobless in the capital zone dramatically decreased and reached the same percentages with those inhabitants at another regions.
Initially, the percentage of unemployment in the rural areas was almost 6.5%, while idleness in the city showed the reverse, and this was almost three time less than those in the former region, at around 2%, having a gap 4%. Between October and December, the latter group almost had the same proportion of jobless as the first area, it accounted at hovering 4.9%.
If looking between from January to December, the unemployed in rustic zones decreased slightly to around 4.5%, and this remained stable over 9 months, reaching 5% in the last quarter. Albeit the number of people without work in the second region was lowest in the first part of the year, this inclined and fell through 6 months before hitting the peak at 5% at the end.
- Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion 78
- The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012 84
- the map below show the village of stokeford in1930 and 2010 summarise the information and make comparison where relevant 67
- The maps below illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 to 2012 84
- Many products that people buy are made in other countries Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45282011787 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605714285714 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2321625726 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.166666667 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12739824473 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713692986101 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707511866914 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960320080181 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727332995289 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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