The pie graph illustrate how the proportion in typical meals of three types of nutrients vary from each other in the USA, all of them are unhealthy if eaten too much.
Overall, It is clear that the use of added sugar is diverse from the sodium and the Saturated fat.
Looking at the detail, dinner occupy the biggest proportion(about 40%) of sodium and saturated fat. On the contrary, only 23% of added sugar are used in dinner, and what top the percentage added sugar is snacks which use 42% of added sugar. In addition, added sugar, made up breakfast, is less in lunch at 16% which is similar with the proportion of breakfast in sodium(14%) and in saturated fat(16%). The rest of 19% of added sugar is used in lunch. Furthermore, 29% of sodium and 26% of saturated fat belong to lunch. Finally, snacks occupy 14% of the percentage of sodium and 21% of the proportion of saturated fat.
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
- The plans below show the layout of a university’s sport center now, and how it will look after redevelopment. 73
- Q:- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- Q:- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, look, so, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56603773585 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5521265538 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534591194969 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0622499992 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0898713498056 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398569277353 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734853324032 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872018028757 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10225755931 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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