The graphs illustrate the numbers of the UK students graduated and postgraduated not applying for a full-time job in the year of 2008.
It can be seen clearly that there were 4 main reasons for this, including: having part-time work, voluntary work, further study and unemployment. Generally, the rank in two bar charts was similar in their categories. Among that, students who wanted to be volunteers occupied the lowest proportion while desired to have more study got the highest one in both cases. However, the average figure for graduate students was much more significant the postgraduate students.
Taking a detailed look into the first chart, further study had an overwhelming rate of nearly 30,000, more than over 6 times compared to voluntary work that was 3,500. The sencond and third highest were part-time work and unemployment with no far distance of 17,735 and 16,235 students, respectively.
Meanwhile, the second graph shows us all ratios under 3,000, which were 2,725; 2,535;1,625 and 345 with the same order of factors as the UK graduates chart indicated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18965517241 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.786265932 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.712643678161 0.547539520022 130% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6530483802 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.875 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232456743956 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963151107827 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637348412249 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146221971023 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627555115696 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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