The bar chart illustrate information about the amount of exports done by four countries in five categories in 2015 and 2016. The bar chart is also supported by a a table that depicts information about percentage difference during those 2 years.
The x axis in the bar chart depicts information about Product Category, while the y axis gives information about number of export earnings in billion dollars.
In general, it is clear that both in 2015 and 2016, most export earnings come from Petroleum Products category, while Textiles become the least category. In a detail, the country has earned about 60 billion dollars from exporting Petroleum Products in 2015, and there is 3% increase to 63 billion dollars in 2016. Following Petroleum Products, there is Engineered Goods category, which the amount gained from export is 55 billion dollars in 2015. The next year, the number earned from export is increased 8.5% to about 63 billion dollars. On the third place, the country exported Gems and Jewellery in about 40 billion dollars in 2015. Furthermore, in 2016, the export incomes fall about 5.18% to around 40 billion dollars. Agricultural Products contribute for export earnings on the 4th place, with the amount of about 31 billion dollars in 2015, which then increases slightly to about 32 billion dollars in 2016. In the last place is Textiles category, where it gives the country around 25 billion dollars from being exported in 2015, and increases 15.24% to about 30 billion dollars.
In conclusion, the most export incomes are derived from Petroleum Products while the least came from Textiles Category, in both 2015 and 2016. And also, there are various number of ups and downs during those two years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, third, well, while, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 965.302439024 149% => OK
No of words: 284.0 196.424390244 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06338028169 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51465650178 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426056338028 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 283.868780488 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2919936487 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.615384615 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24645599479 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123695483926 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632717629621 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177362079507 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757283834008 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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