The diagram illustrates how to produce milk in detailed steps.
At the beginning, fresh milk is taken from cows; and the final product is packaged milk after 6 procedures in total.
Looking at the picture in more detail, cows are kept at farms to graze on grass. Fresh milk from those cows is collected by a milking machine twice a day, before being stored in refrigerators. After that, tankers deliver refrigerated milk to Dairy where cheese, cream and butter are manufactured. It can be seen that those additional products are also made from cow milk.
During the pasteurization step, milk is heated under high temperature and cooled to kill all harmful bacteria. It is then packaged in bottles and transported to super-markets and shops for display.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 630.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 126.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82802624215 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698412698413 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.6463803458 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.75 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217602492129 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939480614882 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069713663761 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13873653217 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056299636201 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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