The diagram below shows how avocado oil is extracted

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The diagram below shows how avocado oil is extracted.

The process of extracting avocado oil is briefly illustrated by the given diagram.
In the overview, the whole process is conducted in seven separate steps to transfer the initial avocado ingredient into the final bottle of avocado oil. All of the byproducts of the process are collected and delivered to the orchard afterward.
In the beginning, the obtained fruit is carried to the manufacturer and undergoes the ripening stage. This stage is performed manually, while the rest of the procedure is assisted by modern machines. Followingly, the rotten fruits are bathed in the washer to ensure there is no possible contaminant left, which later becomes the input for the blender and crusher complex to eliminate the seeds and skins while only the fleshes are kept for the ongoing extraction steps.
Since then, the operation requires two continuous stages of centrifugation. After the initial stage, the obtained product contains two distinct layers, in which only the supernatants are utilized for the second centrifuge stage. Subsequently, the oil is isolated from the liquid mixtures and channelized to the filtration step. Here, the oil is clarified and dispensed for the final purified and quality avocado oil, which is eventually packed into bottles.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 154, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...t into the final bottle of avocado oil. All of the byproducts of the process are collected...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, if, second, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33668341709 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82158007298 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582914572864 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.6539111135 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.2 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191490616122 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079165088252 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11392645827 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156196791652 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127672671129 0.0819641961636 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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