The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn

The given diagram illustrates the process of how ethanol fuel is produced from corn.
As it can be seen in the diagram that in the first stage, corn is harvested and stored in the warehouse for safety purpose before it is ready for milling. During the milling stage, corn is cut into small pieces and turned into fine grain powder. Then the milled corn is mixed and cooked with water in four hours.
Following the cooking phase, the fermentation stage comes next to separate liquid from the solid by-product for two days. Then, the purification stage proceeds to evaporate the water and extract pure ethanol while the solid waste is used for other useful purpose. Finally, the ethanol is transported to the fuel storage before it is shipped to serve customers at the gas station.
Clearly, the whole process of producing ethanol fuel from corn contains eight different stages, beginning with collection corn and ending at the delivering state.

Votes
Average: 9.2 (2 votes)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96855345912 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39225309829 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616352201258 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4188891697 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338436501888 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15639914292 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179162315227 0.0843802449381 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268669585318 0.15604864568 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.198137727318 0.0819641961636 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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