the diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog
summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features
The chart illustrates the stages in the life of a frog. All in all, this life cycle is comprised of some stages from eggs to an adult frog.
The process begins with eggs on the water. These eggs hatch to be immature frog, called embryo. Once hatching, the embryo experiences a stage in which it changes to be a tadpole. Over the next days, the tadpole emerges front legs where the tadpole cannot breath. In the following stage, the tadpole has complete legs – front legs and back legs, starting to breath. The tadpole still has a fin, a long fin. When the stage in which the tadpole can breath on the land is complete, the body of the tadpole will be bigger and bigger, while the fin will decrease in size.
A tadpole’s state of being able to breath and having complete legs is the stage of being tadpole frog. The tadpole frog can live on both the land and the water, but the fin can still be seen. The final stage is being an adult frog, when the fin of the tadpole frog decreases almost disappear.
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Sentence: Over the next days, the tadpole emerges front legs where the tadpole cannot breath.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to cannot and breath
decreases almost disappear.
decreases to almost disappear.
Sentence: When the stage in which the tadpole can breath on the land is complete, the body of the tadpole will be bigger and bigger, while the fin will decrease in size.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to can and breath
breath noun.
breathe verb.
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