The diagram illustrates the process of development of a salmon in which it emerges and becomes an adult fish.
Overall, it is apparent that the life cycle of a salmon consists of total eight stages that commences at the incubation stage and culminaties in the migration period.
To begin with, the adult salmons start spawning eggs , which will be kept in incubation. After some time, the emergence takes place in which the eggs hatch, and new salmon fish come into world. Subequently, the baby salmons travel to freshwater for the rearing purposes. This is the last stage which takes place in the river.
Next, the estuary rearing process happends, in which baby salmons move from the river to the ocean. Within the ocean, the salmons migrate to rearing areas before attaining growth and maturation. Ultimately, they commence migrating back to spawning areas into the river where they lay eggs. In this way, the process starts anew.
- The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel s customer service The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010 78
- Young people are often the first to suffer when job opportunities are scarce In which ways does age affect employment opportunities How might employees deal with the issues fairly 84
- The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured 61
- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this massage 78
- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...h, the adult salmons start spawning eggs , which will be kept in incubation. After...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03846153846 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44718647675 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7213997256 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248089875894 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882748980239 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075901203607 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15190211796 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617374090287 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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