The diagram below shows the process of how for recycling plastic bottles

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The diagram below shows the process of how for recycling plastic bottles.

The given graph depicts the process of how plastic bottles are being recycled. Overall, it can be seen that in order to recycle the plastic bottles, there are nine main stages.

To begin with, the first stage is when people through their plastic garbage in its bin, then, this waste will be collected by the garbage trucks. After that, the plastic waste goes to the recycling centre where the sorting process hold, and after it is sorted, it will compress into blocks before it goes through the crushing machine.

Moreover, during the crushing phase, there will be water to wash the waste before it is sent to the next stage where plastic pellets are produced. The coming pellets are exposed to heat to form raw materials which are used in producing end products for human use such as plastic bottles, boxes, t-shirts, pencils, and plastic bags until they goes back again to the waste bin.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...s, pencils, and plastic bags until they goes back again to the waste bin.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, so, then, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 741.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78064516129 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06447580606 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61935483871 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.839617098 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213005586275 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114808739658 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833165220994 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15471107382 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783112288596 0.0819641961636 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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