the diagram below shows the process of maple syrup production
The diagram presents the steps involved in the preparation of maple syrup.
Overall, it takes several steps starting with the sap in the tree and ending with either preparation of candies or delivering to stores for the customers to buy.
To begin with, the process starts when the night temperatures are below freezing point and the day temperatures are above freezing point and this is when the sap begins to flow. A tap is put into a tree and a tube is connected to the tap for collection of the sap in a storage tank. From there, it goes to an evaporator where it is boiled until it becomes a syrup.
The syrup is then packed in bottles and cans. Some of it is shipped to stores, where people buy it and enjoy at home. Some of the syrup is used to make candies or as an ingredient in cakes and other foods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 120, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
... where people buy it and enjoy at home. Some of the syrup is used to make candies or as an ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 673.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39869281046 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41308393344 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.921439864 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.125 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162474105216 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717616037698 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847350504757 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110140324215 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10115526501 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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