The diagram below shows the process of recycling glass bottles

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The diagram below shows the process of recycling glass bottles.

The given diagram illustrates how glass bottles are recycled through a process.
Overall, it is apparent that there are three prominent stages in the whole process, initiating with the collection of glass garbage, and culminating in delivering new recycled products to the market.
At the first stage of manufacturing, used glass bottles are gathered at a collecting point and then loaded onto trucks for delivery to a cleaning facility. Following there is the washing of these wastes, before being sorted into different categories encompassing brown, green, and clear glass. Next, they are taken to a recycling plant after which the process continues with burning them in a furnace where the liquid is formed. The recycled liquid glass and the new liquid glass from other sources are then shaped in a glass mold to produce new bottles.
In the final stage, there is the delivery of the new glass bottles to supermarkets ready to sell for customers.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 295, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d glass is transformed into liquid form, and it is joined with new liquid glass f...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30065359477 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67752179952 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660130718954 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1648199163 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.166666667 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328782409272 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172362646352 0.103423049105 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142917438079 0.0843802449381 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193791180123 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144726003574 0.0819641961636 177% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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