The diagram below shows the production of olive oil.
The diagram explains the process for the making of olive oil. Overall, there are a total of seven stages, beginning with picking olives and culminating in the selling of the oil.
Initially, ripe olives are gathered from the trees and are put in baskets. The second step is that olives are rinsed in cold water by a machine to get rid of dirt and any detrimental insects, then clean olives are moved on the belt to the next machine. Consequently, olives are smashed in order to be smooth. At this stage, ground olives are made into paste, and olive stones are removed.
The olive paste is then put into a bag with holes before being put into a pressing machine. Once the bag has been pressed, olive paste is processed by a separating machine to remove excess water from the oil. Ultimately, olive oil is packaged and then delivered to shops or markets where it will be sold.
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- The diagram below shows the production of olive oil 78
- Some people think that children should start formal education at schools as early as possible others feel that the children should go to schools when they are at least seven years old Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'totals'?
Suggestion: totals
...king of olive oil. Overall, there are a total of seven stages, beginning with picking...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 158.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57594936709 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.337637472 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588607594937 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0650189727 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3333333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271575743901 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128589682842 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682196009497 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203252651626 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576331069023 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.