The diagram gives information about the stages in the production of yogurt.
Overall, is clearly evident that, the processes involved in the preparation of yogurt involves 6 steps before they are finally transported in yogurt containers by vehicle.
Firstly, milk is left in a container for exactly half an hour as once more time is allowed, the thicker the yogurt becomes. At this stage, the temperature of the milk is measured at 90 degree celsius with a thermometre. Secondly, the milk is left to cool at a relatively lower temperature (44 degree celsius) as compared with the initial stage. After this, live bacteria is then added to the already cooled milk and left for approximately 4 hours. Here, the temperature is significantly lower than either the first or second stage.
In order to maintain optimal low temperature, the milk is then kept in a refrigerator before an amount of sugar and strawberry are added. Lastly, yogurt is produced, by which it is poured in its containers and carried by vehicle to consumers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00581395349 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90178023909 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610465116279 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.865195779 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128338988217 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054014521645 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745181982411 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107499396772 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794948744486 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.