The flow chart gives a detailed explanation of how the entire bricks are produced to use in the construction industry. The most striking feature is that this procedure consists of six stages.
In the first step, the clay, which is the raw material of making bricks, is dug up by a digger. Then, it is placed on a metal grid so that small pieces fall to a roller below. In the next stage, sand and water are added and the mixture of them will be placed in a mould or a wire cutter to make the shape of brick before the soft bricks are moved into a drying oven for 24 to 48 hours.
Later, bricks are going to be fired in two special kilns at a moderate temperature (200c – 980c) and a higher one (870c -1300c), respectively. Next, they will be packed to move to tracks in order to deliver to customers after being treated in a cooling chamber.
In conclusion, the process of manufacturing bricks comprises six steps which are mentioned above.
- The table shows the expenditure on various types of food in one European country in 1992 2002 and 2012 The amount spent on various foodstuffs in Italy millions of euros 1992 2002 2012 Beef 45 43 54 Chicken 38 41 56 Butter margarine 8 9 8 Potatoes 11 14 18 64
- Some people say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing together To what extent do you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another 89
- The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 56
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- writing task 1: the birth rates of China and America 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39428571429 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47471457847 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662857142857 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8350339782 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.125 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142502449154 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547995954426 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459512403206 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861967135815 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413460006353 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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