This diagram depicts the procedure of bricks formation for construction purposes.
Overall, it is a seven steps process starting from digging clay from the ground. After passing this clay through several machinery, bricks become ready to be delivered to construction industry.
To begin, a giant digger is used to collect clay which is then filtered through a metallic grid in second step. The filtered product is rolled in order to convert it into finer particles. After this, sand and water is mixed with it and the final amalgam is either passed through wire cutter or a molder which bring brick into appropriate shapes and sizes.
Once the bricks have been modeled, the next step is to allow them to dry for 24 to 48 hours in drying oven. Following this, further processing is done in a kiln that is capable of providing with intense temperature. In kiln, bricks are baked at moderate to high temperature reaching up to 870 to 1300 degrees. However, a cooling chamber is also part of this furnace where a sudden drop of temperature is used to do advanced processing. After 48 to 72 hours of cold therapy, bricks finally come out and can be supplied for building purposes. They are then transported to construction sites for consumption by trucks and other vehicles.
- Some children find learning history at school very exciting, but many others think it is very boring. In what ways can history be brought to life for all school children? 84
- The graph below shows the number of trips made by children in one country to travel to school in 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 67
- The graph below shows the number of trips made by children in one country to travel to school in 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 11
- technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the world today. In the not too distant future, technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this statement ? 78
- Nowadays a lot of offices are being built an open plan design. Why is that? Do you see this as a positive or negative development?. Discuss your opinion and support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun machinery seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some machinery'.
Suggestion: some machinery
...ground. After passing this clay through several machinery, bricks become ready to be delivered to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.866359447 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65301744451 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635944700461 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6729745115 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.0 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148438988698 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514272443095 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335480241823 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918781839095 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418488906693 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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