The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The given figure illustrates the process of manufacturing chocolate from the cacao tree.
From an overall perspective, it is apparent that the method of producing chocolate is a linear process that consists of 10 distinct steps. This procedure begins with harvesting cacao pods from various nations and culminates with turning the mixture of chocolate into liquid.
The process commences with collecting and assembling the cacao pods which are ripe from cacao trees in numerous countries such as America, Africa, etc. Subsequently, pods are split then the workers gather white cocoa beans inside them. Next, beans are fermented and dried under the sun to ensure that these ingredients are waterless. In the fifth step, the manufacturers put those dried beans into large sacks.
Moving to the sixth step, the sacks containing beans are delivered by a factory's train or lorry to the producer. Following that, the employees roast these waterless beans in the hating machine at 350 Celcius degrees. After the baking stage, those beans are crushed, which makes their outer shell easily to be removed. Finally, the inner components in these beans are put in pressing equipment in order to tuen the solid cacao into liquid chocolate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27411167513 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57382932364 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634517766497 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7030527727 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.4545454545 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0423245814032 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0170563150137 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024793239539 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0327287269401 0.15604864568 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265744736236 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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