The diagram shows the process through which Geothermal Energy is use to produce power.
Overall, turbine rotates by the power of the steam which comes from cold water through a relatively sophisticated process, which comprises over five stage.
The process begins when cold water is pushed into long pathway -about 4.5 km- and reached at the injection wall. Afterwards, the geothermal zone, which is the main thing of whole procedure, with hot rocks makes water hot before touching the production wall.
The following step involves a condenser, a turbine and a generator which are connect with a bit larger pathway than that of previous one. The hot water from the production wall go into the condenser through this pathway and produce steam, following which, the turbine starts rotating by the power of steam. Once the turbine begins to rotating a generator-which is linked with this- starts producing electricity. The power of generator comes from the rotating turbine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: BE_USE_TO_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...cess through which Geothermal Energy is use to produce power. Overall, turbine r...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'connected'.
Suggestion: connected
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Line 7, column 308, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... starts rotating by the power of steam. Once the turbine begins to rotating a genera...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24840764331 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6280659231 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56050955414 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5226600215 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 5.23603664747 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143446624167 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883807473154 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163697626686 0.0843802449381 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149886845988 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.209062863839 0.0819641961636 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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