The diagram illustrates the process of recycling the rainwater in a particular town in Australia.
Overall, it is readily apparent that the process involves five main steps, which start when the rainwater is collected by a drainage system, are followed by various treatment steps, and end when the treated water is delivered into accommodations for domestic consumption.
Looking at the diagram for the detail, the initial stage of the process involves collecting the rainwater on the roof by a series of drains, which then flows into a storage tank. From there, the water is passed through a series of filters, which remove any debris and impurities. After that, the filtered water is pumped into a reservoir, where it undergoes further treatment to remove any remaining contaminants.
At the next stage, the stored water is transferred via a pipe system into a water treatment plant. At this plant, the treatment water chemicals are added for further purification. The clean water is subsequently transported through a network of pipes, and eventually distributed into domestic use as the drinking water from the faucets.
- Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motor bike To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966 1986 and 2006 67
- The bar chart below shows the amount of money invested in each categories from five organizations 73
- The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966 1986 and 2006 67
- The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27222222222 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9151530464 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561111111111 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.860932502 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.625 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266880576578 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115253379946 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525094585764 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159712733454 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300318374491 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.