the diagrams below describe h to recycle organic waste to produce fertilizer

Essay topics:

the diagrams below describe hơ to recycle organic waste to produce fertilizer.

The given diagrams present information on how to make compost using recycled organic waste. In general, there are five distinct steps in total to finish this process, beginning with the preparation and ending with the final compost using for gardening purposes.

At the first step in the process, we can clearly see that a plastic container with a volume of two cubic meters is prepared carefully with 3 holes on each side to help the air circulate. Subsequently, the organic waste is added into the bottle in the following order: food, grass and newspaper, and specially noted that the thickness of the first two layers is 15 cm. At step three, nitrogen and hot water are drained out into the mixture in the jar.

At the fourth step shown on the diagram, the bottle is covered with a lid to allow the inside contents to self-heat, and the generated heat will be released from the six holes on the two sides of the jar. Finally, after 6 months, the compost is successfully produced for use in the garden.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... drained out into the mixture in the jar At the fourth step shown on the diagram ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cessfully produced for use in the garden
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62359550562 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38253254026 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 178.0 22.4926829268 791% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 823.0 112.824112599 729% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 178.0 22.9334400587 776% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.0 5.23603664747 497% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123606326982 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123606326982 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854753818956 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404129722645 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 89.3 13.2329268293 675% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -92.27 61.2550243902 -151% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 70.3 10.3012195122 682% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.7 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.1 8.06136585366 200% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 11.4329268293 481% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 73.2 10.9970731707 666% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 11.0658536585 497% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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