Given is the diagram delineating the process of producing frozen fish pies. Perceptibly, this is a linear process with multible steps, which commences with delivering potatoes and ends with dispatching the frozen fish pies.
The process initiates when potatoes are delivered carefully to the factory up to a month to prepare for the next steps. Following that, Potatoes are washed with water to clean the dirt. Followed by potatoes are peeled and cut into thin pieces. They, thereafter, are boiled in water with high temperature prior to chill in a period of time and stored step. At the same breath, Salmon are keeped to be fresh and sent by truck to factory in 12 hours or less before processing. Afterthat, salmon fish is squeezed lemon and sprinkled salt followed by they are steamed for a suitable time. Subsequently, Bones and skins are removed manually before being strictly consored for the next stage. Thereafter, Salmon is prepared with peas and sauce. Finally,Salmon and potatoes are prepared and wrapped carefully to be kept frozen before sold in the market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 324, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...th high temperature prior to chill in a period of time and stored step. At the same breath, Sa...
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Line 2, column 450, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun hours is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...sent by truck to factory in 12 hours or less before processing. Afterthat, salmon fi...
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Line 2, column 697, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...consored for the next stage. Thereafter, Salmon is prepared with peas and sauce. ...
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Line 2, column 746, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Salmon
...is prepared with peas and sauce. Finally,Salmon and potatoes are prepared and wrapped c...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05649717514 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65921106571 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587570621469 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5538493736 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3636363636 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0511801373053 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0223990115741 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392202134907 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566698669353 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039413104173 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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