The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton

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The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.

The given pie chart depicts data on the percentage of Edmonton residents who travel by car, LRT (Light Rail Transit), bus and taxi, whereas the table illustrates the reasons why the people living in the city in question prefer travelling by car.

Overall, it is clear that the majority of people use the car as the main means of transport and, moreover, they do this mostly in order to commute to work.

Looking at the pie chart, it can be observed that the number of residents who use the car (45%) exceeds the numbers of those who choose to travel by the other means of transport given. The second most preferred means of transport is LRT, where the passengers account for 35% of the Edmonton residents. The figure for people who travel by taxi or bus comes in sharp contrast with the aforementioned ones, at only 10%.

In terms of the reasons why people living in Edmonton prefer the car to the other means of transport, the highest figure is that for commuting, at 55%. 45% of the residents use the car for business purposes an slightly less people (40%) drive their children to school. People travelling by car for shopping or leisure activities purposes comprise a mere 15% of the total number of residents.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 208, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...dents use the car for business purposes an slightly less people 40% drive their ch...
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Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...e car for business purposes an slightly less people 40% drive their children to scho...
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Line 7, column 391, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e 15% of the total number of residents.
^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['look', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'whereas']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.311203319502 0.268076937826 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.132780082988 0.116061578633 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0497925311203 0.0759168565197 66% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0207468879668 0.0366838410393 57% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0165975103734 0.0131127313244 127% => OK
Prepositions: 0.161825726141 0.155750635184 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0290456431535 0.0379272487307 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.4697192655 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0207468879668 0.0210936926555 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.124481327801 0.0948980150116 131% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00414937759336 0.00437022459523 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0290456431535 0.00967000014798 300% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1217.0 1161.00487805 105% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.9 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66046511628 5.90752243213 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73763899035 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.320930232558 0.337110787985 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.218604651163 0.247514529752 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162790697674 0.171178102325 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0883720930233 0.112407865282 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4697192655 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.546246751206 98% => OK
Word variations: 48.7339468798 49.3433353143 99% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 26.875 23.0094962315 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8671634458 42.9750493124 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.125 135.714022679 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 23.0094962315 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.689975730869 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.48048780488 203% => OK
Readability: 48.7354651163 47.7609492067 102% => OK
Elegance: 2.9512195122 2.94281807926 100% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306395965592 0.418131533498 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.216512793741 0.181151798455 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0630573175506 0.0850326197045 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.779000262135 0.706616315825 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147439064301 0.157042692854 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181375908761 0.228904883108 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730588184727 0.108899403657 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.459737112832 0.367819155151 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.124778266208 0.0812612215331 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244142664241 0.316326947829 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302921753908 0.0921553760075 33% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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