The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.

Essay topics:

The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.

The pie chart depicts the transportation mode preference among Edmonton residents for cars LRT (light rail transit) bus or taxi, while, the tabular infographic illustrates commuters' different reasons in order to use cars in urban areas.

Overall, car and LRT are gaining more prevalence among Edmonton residents. Nevertheless, cars are being used for professional prospectives and for Children's school purpose, most.

In detail, just less than half of the Edmonton residents (45%) prefer to use cars as a transportation mode. Moreover, slightly more than one-third of public(35%) prefer to commute using LRT. While buses and Taxies are not much preferable among Edmonton residents ,as only total 20% - 10% for the bus and 10% for the taxi - of Edmonton residents accept this way for transportation.

Among all reason for car use, lion's share is acquired by "commute to work" or "business" purposes. As more than half of citizen(55%) use the car in order to reach the workplace, which is followed by car use for business purpose (45%). Additionally, the car share used to take children to school is approximately the same as that in business perspectives. For shopping and leisure activities,car is the least preferable mode for Edmonton residents (15% for each).

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...much preferable among Edmonton residents ,as only total 20% - 10% for the bus and ...
^^
Line 5, column 341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...10% for the taxi - of Edmonton residents accept this way for transportation. A...
^^
Line 7, column 407, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , car
...ves. For shopping and leisure activities,car is the least preferable mode for Edmont...
^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'third', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.361788617886 0.268076937826 135% => OK
Verbs: 0.105691056911 0.116061578633 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0731707317073 0.0759168565197 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0325203252033 0.0366838410393 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.146341463415 0.155750635184 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0284552845528 0.0379272487307 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.2541634787 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0284552845528 0.0210936926555 135% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0650406504065 0.0948980150116 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00406504065041 0.00967000014798 42% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1277.0 1161.00487805 110% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.9 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.29064039409 5.90752243213 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73763899035 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.330049261084 0.337110787985 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285714285714 0.247514529752 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.241379310345 0.171178102325 141% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.167487684729 0.112407865282 149% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2541634787 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576354679803 0.546246751206 106% => OK
Word variations: 53.8443457663 49.3433353143 109% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3 23.0094962315 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0413647761 42.9750493124 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.7 135.714022679 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 23.0094962315 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.689975730869 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.48048780488 203% => OK
Readability: 48.8714285714 47.7609492067 102% => OK
Elegance: 3.88235294118 2.94281807926 132% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254609078522 0.418131533498 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125632845626 0.181151798455 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0778432745573 0.0850326197045 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.629316200034 0.706616315825 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.159297867266 0.157042692854 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123261520512 0.228904883108 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664420410637 0.108899403657 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.232288586553 0.367819155151 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0836132639656 0.0812612215331 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172109205937 0.316326947829 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037190807025 0.0921553760075 40% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...much preferable among Edmonton residents ,as only total 20% - 10% for the bus and ...
^^
Line 5, column 341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...10% for the taxi - of Edmonton residents accept this way for transportation. A...
^^
Line 7, column 407, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , car
...ves. For shopping and leisure activities,car is the least preferable mode for Edmont...
^^^^

Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'third', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.361788617886 0.268076937826 135% => OK
Verbs: 0.105691056911 0.116061578633 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0731707317073 0.0759168565197 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0325203252033 0.0366838410393 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.146341463415 0.155750635184 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0284552845528 0.0379272487307 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.2541634787 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0284552845528 0.0210936926555 135% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0650406504065 0.0948980150116 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00406504065041 0.00967000014798 42% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1277.0 1161.00487805 110% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.9 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.29064039409 5.90752243213 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73763899035 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.330049261084 0.337110787985 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285714285714 0.247514529752 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.241379310345 0.171178102325 141% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.167487684729 0.112407865282 149% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2541634787 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576354679803 0.546246751206 106% => OK
Word variations: 53.8443457663 49.3433353143 109% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3 23.0094962315 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0413647761 42.9750493124 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.7 135.714022679 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 23.0094962315 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.689975730869 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.48048780488 203% => OK
Readability: 48.8714285714 47.7609492067 102% => OK
Elegance: 3.88235294118 2.94281807926 132% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254609078522 0.418131533498 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125632845626 0.181151798455 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0778432745573 0.0850326197045 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.629316200034 0.706616315825 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.159297867266 0.157042692854 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123261520512 0.228904883108 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664420410637 0.108899403657 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.232288586553 0.367819155151 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0836132639656 0.0812612215331 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172109205937 0.316326947829 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037190807025 0.0921553760075 40% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.