The maps illustrate a proposed change for ground floor work of a house.
First of all, there will be kitchen furniture added in the kitchen on the west wing. There is an internal door on the top right side of the kitchen near the west entrance door, and an internal wall on the right which separates the kitchen and the hall. The internal door will be changed to double doors and moved to the bottom right side, near the south entrance door.
Secondly, the stairs in the hall will be altered to spiral stairs which is bigger than the previous one. The storage under the stairs will be removed to free up some space needed for the spiral stairs. The internal wall and the internal door separating the hall and the living room on the right side will be removed. As a result, the hall will be no longer there because it is merged with the living room.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, secondly, so, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 697.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41139240506 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01958246854 2.65546596893 76% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3698625316 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.125 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0584896201501 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427120133804 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088847871107 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987353437539 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121076763886 0.0819641961636 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 11.4140731707 73% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.