The first process illustrates how cement is manufactured as well as the ingredient needed for the progress; whereas the second one shows stages to produce basic building material, which is concrete, from cement.
Overall, it is clear that there 6 stages to produce cement, beginning with the mixture of limestone and clay and finishing with packaged cement. Addtionally, concrete is made by 4 primary elements.
In order to produce cement, limestone and clay are crushed together in a crusher, then the powder is transferred to a mixer for being further mixed before going to a rotating heater. In this stage, the mixture is heated by fire while being rotated in the heater. After that, the product is sent to a belt before being ground in order to become cement. Finally, cement is packed into bags and ready for delivery.
Meanwhile, concrete which is used for construction is produce by 4 elements, namely 15% cement, together with 10% water, 25% sand, and 50% gravel (small stones). The compound is then mixed in a large mixer before being used as concrete for construction.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 73
- The graph below gives information about international migration to the UK, 1999 -2008 61
- The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling. 84
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. 73
- The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, then, well, whereas, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01104972376 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62710522778 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580110497238 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8392669589 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.777777778 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377943660212 0.215688989381 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140602838718 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814709272929 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227115062872 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603102388282 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.