The diagrams illustrate the design of a single and double room study area

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The diagrams illustrate the design of a single and double room study area.

Submitted by myyyu on Tue, 03/29/2022 - 09:38

The maps show the layout of single and double room with study facilities.
Overall, it is easy to see that double room is expensive than single room. Moreover, in the left double room is added two windows. In addition, it is clear that single room is less interior than double room.
The single room costs 200$, while the double room costs expensive is 350$ per week. The both wide of two rooms are same 6m, the length of single room is 2.5m shorter than double room is 2.5m.
The kitchen in two room are still location but the direction of both room are different, the table is added next to the kitchen. Moreover, in the double have two beds and windows next to it while single room only have one bed.
It is to see that location about bookshelves and TV are different in both room. The centre in single room have only a cupboard, while the design in centre in double room have many thing such as two cupboards, TV and bookshelves.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$200'.
Suggestion: $200
...han double room. The single room costs 200$, while the double room costs expensive ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$350'.
Suggestion: $350
...hile the double room costs expensive is 350$ per week. The both wide of two rooms ar...
^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...2.5m shorter than double room is 2.5m. The kitchen in two room are still location ...
^^^
Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
...he design in centre in double room have many thing such as two cupboards, TV and bookshelv...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, still, while, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42196531792 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15923615626 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445086705202 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9109643083 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3849112599 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201419066509 0.103423049105 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778699323814 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260878457095 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629616417887 0.0819641961636 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.12 8.06136585366 76% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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