Ex 2 The bar chart shows the percentage of small medium large companies which used social media for business purposes between 2012 to 2016

The graph compares the proportion of people living alone in terms of different ages from 1850 to 2000.

Overall, there are a growing number of people living alone in all ages, from 17 years old to 64 years old. Another striking feature is that, the most living alone group is the oldest age group the number of people older than 55 live alone at the highest rate across all years surveyed.

In detail, starting at around 3% in 1850, the percentage of people aged 55-64 rose steadily to a low of 4% in 1950 before surging to 17% in 2000. In a similar pattern, though begun at the same point at a high of 2% in 1850, the figures for 37-46-year-olds and 47-54-year-olds increased marginally to approximately 3% and a low of 4% in 1950 respectively. After 5 years, the percentage of those from 47 to 54 years of age witnessed a fourfold rise to roughly 13% while that of people aged 37-46 doubled to 7%.

In regard to people aged 27 to 36, its proportion only appeared in 1900, at around 2% then rocketed to 8% in the end of the period. Similarly, the figure for people aged 17-36 joined the data in 1950, at a low of 2%, the lowest rate compared to other age groups. After 5 years, it increased by a half to a high of 4%.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, then, while, in regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31601731602 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55916295746 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532467532468 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3305627556 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.777777778 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0233077368215 0.215688989381 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.011234637038 0.103423049105 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0126865130363 0.0843802449381 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0131068472238 0.15604864568 8% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147783011903 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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