Explain the process below of hydro-electric power generation.

Submitted by alxxk on Tue, 12/25/2018 - 12:14

In the visual illustration below; there's the function of the Hydro-electric power generation.

what can be depicted in the diagram is the sun heating the sea water until it reaches boiling point resulting in: Evaporation. this causes the clouds to pour rain in the reservoirs that contain a manmade dam. Therefore the water gets through the Valve to either two ways; one way is by travelling from the turbine than the pump back to the reservoir creating a small cycle. However, the other route is from the turbine to high voltage cables. Then the water will be transported to the transformer station where it goes through underground tunnels referred to as "cables" to building such as: hospitals, schools, houses and factories.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
In the visual illustration below; theres the function of the Hydro-electric powe...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
...the Hydro-electric power generation. what can be depicted in the diagram is the s...
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Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...oiling point resulting in: Evaporation. this causes the clouds to pour rain in the r...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... reservoirs that contain a manmade dam. Therefore the water gets through the Valve to eit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, then, therefore, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 621.0 965.302439024 64% => OK
No of words: 121.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13223140496 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.31662479036 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01348198885 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.719008264463 0.547539520022 131% => OK
syllable_count: 181.8 283.868780488 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.085029468 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119190773215 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775485887228 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173403915943 0.0843802449381 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232645766169 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.232645766169 0.0819641961636 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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