The first given pie chart illustrates the consumption of energy which is used by the individuals of Australia for various purposes, where as second reveals the proportion of greenhouse gas emissions released from using energy.
Overall, it is interesting to note that, the highest part of energy is utilised for heating but emit of greenhouse gas produces from water heating.
It can be clearly seen that, for heating work, 42% of energy is consumed which is a maximum proportion as compare to others. Moreover, around one third of Total energy is used for water heating which is double of other appliances (15%), while there is nominal percentage of energy used for cooling (2%),lighting(4%)and refrigeration(7%).
Moving farther, water heating is a vast source of greenhouse gas EMIT which releases nearly one third of total emissions followed by other appliances (28%) which is the second major cause of it which is double of refrigeration.However, heating, cooling and lighting are responsible of 15%, 3%, and 8% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...uals of Australia for various purposes, where as second reveals the proportion of greenh...
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Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
... of it which is double of refrigeration.However, heating, cooling and lighting are resp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, moreover, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28048780488 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20912496575 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55487804878 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0109081895 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.2 112.824112599 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295723909877 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16943729094 0.103423049105 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100614015923 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191571493588 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992525166006 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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