The flow chart below explains how laundry is handled.
The chart illustrate the way linen is transport and washed by a machine.
Overall, towels are separated from other linen is washed differently. Other linen is left damp and need to be ironed, while towels are completely dried and do not need to be ironed.
All laundry is taken from the customers and towels are removed from the linen as they are washed differently. Laundry is packed into laundry bags and transported to the washing machine where they are put for washing, which last for 2 hours.
Furthermore, after 2 hours lapsed, water from the linen is slightly drained by pressing a button on the machine. This process differentiate linen from towels, as the latter is dried completely, whilst linen is left damp and ironed. Lastly, all the laundry is ferried to a folding machine in preparation for transportation to the owner.
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 84
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. 56
- The first graph below shows the weight in tonnes of fruit produced by a farm during each month in 2013 and also the amount in tonnes of fertiliser used The second graph shows the volome of rainfall in each month in millilitres 54
- The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit during the same two periods. 67
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
The chart illustrate the way linen is transport and washed b...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e completely dried and do not need to be ironed. All laundry is taken from t...
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Line 13, column 127, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'differentiates'.
Suggestion: differentiates
...g a button on the machine. This process differentiate linen from towels, as the latter is dri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, lastly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98591549296 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72337701842 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.2140885276 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.5 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0698186702622 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358985712185 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372264335722 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0509469326406 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379867394743 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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