The given line graph provides information on the rate of visitors come to Scotland to visit different places of fascination between 1980 and 2010.
What stands out from the graph is that the proportion of tourists who visited castle and zoo in Scotland increased; however, the opposite trend was true for the other two places namely aquarium and festival where the percentage of visitors plummeted in the final year.
At the beginning year, starting at 10%, the rate of visitors to the zoo oscillated between 1980 and 2000, but later went up sharply to 20% in the year 2010 and became the second highest attraction. The number of travelers to castle in Scotland upsurged rapidly from 23% to 45% in 1995 before slumping significantly to around 32% during the last years and reached the vertex compared to the three remaining fascinations.
In the first five years, the percentage of tourists visiting aquarium waved at 20%. However, two years later, the number of Scotlander to this place tumbled considerably to less than 10%. In addition, there was a marked decline by 12% in the number of people who came to visit festival in 2010.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90155440415 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60253244337 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59585492228 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4113058906 43.030603864 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.142857143 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240937894792 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114954707393 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129475711265 0.0843802449381 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1760779693 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137841645664 0.0819641961636 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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