The given line graph and table well depict how monthly temperatures and average sunshine duration have been distributed per year, in three major cities. It can be clearly seen that unstable is the most significant trend.
Begin with the data from line graph, Sydney has the highest temperature at the starting point, which is at 25C on January, respectively. It then falls down dramatically to almost 15C after remaining unchanged in the first three months, before rising up again to 25C at the end of the year. Following this segment is the temperature of London, which starts with almost 10C on January and then has a slight growth to 23C in the middle of July. London city’s temperature then takes a gradual fall to almost 10C, within the rest half of the year. Lastly, a significant rise has been occurred in New York, from under 5C to approximately 30C in July, before ending up with 5C on December.
Moving to the table data on total sunshine duration, New York and Sydney both have nearly the same amount of total sunshine hours, which are respectively 2535 and 2473. Meanwhile, the data of London has been almost halved, compare to those two, with only 1180 hours of sunshine per year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77403846154 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53674457523 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600961538462 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1966512539 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251801651502 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100288743965 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139142366353 0.0843802449381 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200219393254 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132715991697 0.0819641961636 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.