The graph figures the monthly rainfall occurred on year of 2004 for some country in mm.
It is be clearly seen that the peak point of the average rainfall has happened on Oct up to 65 mm before it backs to down on December to be as similar average of Sep at approximately 55 mm.
The average started from approximately 48 on Jan and then reached to the lowest average which occurred on second month Feb at average of 40 mm. The average rainfall after Feb has a gradually increasing to Jun at level of 50 mm. Then the average rainfall was stabled to July before it was backed to increase on Aug to the same level of Sep.
In conclusion,the peak point of average rainfall occurred on Oct, while the break point was on Feb.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 7, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... 2004 for some country in mm. It is be clearly seen that the peak point of the...
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Line 5, column 340, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ncrease on Aug to the same level of Sep. In conclusion, The peak point of average...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 598.0 965.302439024 62% => OK
No of words: 137.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36496350365 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44883711982 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540145985401 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 186.3 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0153871909 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100415949616 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686193659831 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660773080707 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862553464298 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071447328346 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 40.7170731707 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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