The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line grap shows information about the price of bananas in four nations during 1994 and 2004. By the attraction of bananas that the price of bananas in japan had reach a peak with approximate 3 dollars per kilogram in 1995.
At first, with Germany and USA where had the lowest price of banans price per kilogram in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Not only did germany had fluctuate with less than 1,5 dollars per kilogram during 1994 and 2002 and it had steady 2 years latter with over 1 dollar per kilogram, but also usa had fluctuate first 5 years and it had steady during 1994 and 2004 with more than 1 dollar per kilogram.
In france which had reach a down peak with 1 dollar per kilogram in 2003 and it had icreased significantly with over 0,5 dollar per kilogram in 2004, in japan where had fluctuate during 1996 to 2001 and it had rose graduately with more than 2.5 dollar per kilogram in 2004. Bananas were favorite food in many contries in all around the worlds, so the price of this food is not really cheap.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The line grap shows information about th...
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...ximate 3 dollars per kilogram in 1995. At first, with Germany and USA where had...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'fluctuated'.
Suggestion: fluctuated
...1994 and 2004. Not only did germany had fluctuate with less than 1,5 dollars per kilogram...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'fluctuated'.
Suggestion: fluctuated
...1994 and 2004. Not only did germany had fluctuate with less than 1,5 dollars per kilogram...
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...with more than 1 dollar per kilogram. In france which had reach a down peak wi...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'reached'.
Suggestion: reached
...r per kilogram. In france which had reach a down peak with 1 dollar per kilogram ...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'fluctuated'.
Suggestion: fluctuated
...er kilogram in 2004, in japan where had fluctuate during 1996 to 2001 and it had rose gra...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'fluctuated'.
Suggestion: fluctuated
...er kilogram in 2004, in japan where had fluctuate during 1996 to 2001 and it had rose gra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42105263158 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20954865598 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478947368421 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.731983556 43.030603864 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109450142479 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997460345798 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946649766158 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111074450631 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805688032888 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.95 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.