The line graphs below compare the average number of UK commuters traveling each day by 3 different transport is car, bus and train between 1970 and 2030.
It is obvious that car and train is 2 line had a clearly change. In contrast, bus had not modify too much compare with 2 other lines. During 60 years, car is still the most popular transport in the UK and the same was true for train.
Overall, around 5 million people who use cars as their main vehicle each day in 1970. It is the opposite with train, because only 2 million British people spent money on its at first. In 2000, both types of movement stuff all increased significantly with 7 and 3 million respectively. Over the following 30 years, the number still continue climb steadily with about 9 million for car and more 4 million for train by the proportion of British people who use those.
By 1970, bus users was at 4 million each day. But for some reasons, the number did not maintained long when in 2000 the amount of people who use this transport declined approximately 380 million. Over the period shown, British people did not interested in bus to transfer. The evidence is just roughly below 3 million passengers use this vehicle every day in 2030.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 48, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('clearly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('change') instead of another adjective.
...bvious that car and train is 2 line had a clearly change. In contrast, bus had not modify too mu...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'modified'.
Suggestion: modified
...learly change. In contrast, bus had not modify too much compare with 2 other lines. Du...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'maintain'
Suggestion: maintain
...ut for some reasons, the number did not maintained long when in 2000 the amount of people ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 243, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'interest'
Suggestion: interest
...he period shown, British people did not interested in bus to transfer. The evidence is jus...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55909090909 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44277903657 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577272727273 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2196684386 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5833333333 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356525982685 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142952791946 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19570909562 0.0843802449381 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295838520445 0.15604864568 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.26910810528 0.0819641961636 328% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 48, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('clearly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('change') instead of another adjective.
...bvious that car and train is 2 line had a clearly change. In contrast, bus had not modify too mu...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'modified'.
Suggestion: modified
...learly change. In contrast, bus had not modify too much compare with 2 other lines. Du...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'maintain'
Suggestion: maintain
...ut for some reasons, the number did not maintained long when in 2000 the amount of people ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 243, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'interest'
Suggestion: interest
...he period shown, British people did not interested in bus to transfer. The evidence is jus...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55909090909 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44277903657 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577272727273 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2196684386 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5833333333 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356525982685 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142952791946 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19570909562 0.0843802449381 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295838520445 0.15604864568 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.26910810528 0.0819641961636 328% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.