The graph given illustrates the contribution of agriculture, manufacturing and business and finantial sectors to the economy of UK over the 20th century.
The most noticeable feature is that agriculture sector contribution was significantly higher that participation of Business and Financial sphere in 1900, whereas in 2000 it was almost zero percent. In contrast, it was estimated that Business & Financial contribution was nearly 35% in the end of 20th century, which is seven times as many as initial participation of this sector.
In 1950, Manufacturing was involved in economy of the UK for approximately 40%. In comparison with its participation in 1975, it is slightly higher. Furthermore, agriculture sector contributed to the UK economy for roughly 50% in 1950. Compared with it, the participation of this sector was significantly lower in 1975.
Overall, the contribution of manufacturing and agriculture fields to the UK economy decreases, whereas involvement of business and financial services rose during the 20th century.
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The bar chart shows the
The bar chart shows the contribution of different sectors-agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services- to the UK economy in the twentieth century.
As can we see from the chart, the agriculture and manufacturing were the main sectors to contribute to the UK economy at the beginning of the century. By contrast, the business and financial services became more important by the end of century.
By the 1975, the agriculture has been a sudden decrease with 50% contribution in compared with 10% in the year 1950. As regards, the contribution of the business and financial services, has increase from 5% approximately to 30 and 40% during the period. The manufacturing appears to come after agriculture sector, beginning with a percentage of 45% in the 1990 whereas the rate dropped steadily reaching between 20% and 10% in the years 2000.
As conclusion, the agriculture sector and manufacturing has significantly more contribution than business and financial sector during one century to the UK economy.
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Suggestion: comparison,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, whereas, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65605095541 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47430884978 2.65546596893 131% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515923566879 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7265955885 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290557834809 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145472395714 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107710240261 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221811442202 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915163329143 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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