the bar chart compares the proportion of people who went to the cinema in a country in Europe on a daily basis, in three different years( 2003, 2005 and 2007).
Overall, it is clear that people in this country tended to go to the cinema on the weekends. The largest amount of people who went to the theater on Saturday was who went to the
over the period show.
We can see that this country go to the cinema on Monday, at around 10%, in 2003. While, the number of movie-goers was increased significantly, to 40% for Saturday and 30% for Sunday.
Over the next four years, the percentage of people going to the cinema on the weekends was increased sharply from 42% to 33%, respectively. It is also noticeable that on Monday and on Tuesday become more popular among cinema-goers, with about 10% in 2007. However, the percentage who visited go to the cinema was lowest on Wednesday, with only 8%.
- The chart below gives information about the amount of time children spend with their parents 61
- The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013 33
- Some people think that good health is very important to every person so medical serviceshould not be run by profit making companies 67
- Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships Do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e different years 2003, 2005 and 2007. Overall, it is clear that people in this...
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... theater on Saturday was who went to the over the period show. We can see that...
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...o went to the over the period show. We can see that this country go to the c...
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...o 40% for Saturday and 30% for Sunday. Over the next four years, the percentage...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the lowest'.
Suggestion: was the lowest
...percentage who visited go to the cinema was lowest on Wednesday, with only 8%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54938271605 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5440262983 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543209876543 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.3413228893 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.125 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18555465314 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876942295506 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051757634627 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1007019486 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277409803809 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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