This graph illustrates the percentage of population aged 65 and over in Japan, USA and Sweden in between 1940 and 2040.
According to this chart, the number of people having age 65 and over is generally going to rise in future. However, among these countries Japan will have a considerable increase in those population.
In 1940, all three countries had percentage below 10. It is clear that, USA and Sweden increased gradually till 1980. In contrast, Japan decreased the percentage from 5% to 3% Over this time. Although, Sweden kept on increasing the percentage with few fluctuations during 1980 And 2022, USA maintained a constant figure. However, Japan got gradual increase from 3% to 10%.
Also, from 2020 till 2040, It is predicted that USA and Sweden Will constantly increase their percentage Ending at 23% And 25% respectively. Japan, On the other hand, will encounter steep increase in this year’s ending at 27%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... 65 and over is generally going to rise in future. However, among these countries Japan w...
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Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this population' or 'those populations'?
Suggestion: this population; those populations
...an will have a considerable increase in those population. In 1940, all three countries had p...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iderable increase in those population. In 1940, all three countries had percent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11764705882 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75795309373 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62091503268 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.883774862 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108590405695 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531819105246 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812865828939 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977569907562 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985609920657 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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