The graph shows data about the average Saturday sales of two bakeries in London in 2010.
The bar chart depicts the number of sweet delights that Lovely Loaves and Bernie’s Buns bakeries in London sold on Saturday on average in 2010.
Overall, the prevalence of doughnuts was the highest for both cake shops, whereas toasted sandwiches were the least favored.
As can be seen from the chart, cakes sold in Lovely Loaves were about two-thirds that of Bernie’s Buns with 100 items sold out. The trend is similar for the sale of cookies, of which the former doubled the latter with merely 120 and more than 60 items, respectively.
In addition, for Bernie’s Buns, there was no clear difference in the total number of rolls and crisps bought - both received a sale nearly reaching 80 items. The similarity in consumption of Lovely Loaves’ fresh loaves and crisps with specifically more than 40 items sold out. Moreover, salads were the least-bought item of Bernie’s Buns whereas this is generally favored by customers of Lovely Loaves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, third, whereas, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08860759494 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57325720139 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626582278481 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 12.5438008106 43.030603864 29% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.857142857 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115541333191 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541712801128 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779758734491 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834523432815 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924303804107 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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