The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia.
The graphs depict the number of Freedonia male and female workers (in thousand) in six sectors between 1975 and 1995.
Overall, we can see that, the period saw a consistency in the number of male workers in various sector. Moreover, the figure for female workers increased relatively during this period.
Regarding to male sectors, the number of male employees in Public Sector Non Defence, Wholesale, Manufacturing and Communications Stayed at around 825, 700, 650, 300 respectively. By contrast there was two sectors (Finance/Banking and Public Sector Defence) which experienced an upward and downward trend, while the former rose slightly around 415 to 445 and the letter decreased by approximately 30 from 225 to 195.
In other hand, the figure for female worker in Wholesale and Communications increased significantly by almost 240 and 200 severally, succeeded overtake male workers. Likewise, Finance/Banking and Public Sector Defence in female workers witnessed an upward trend, which showed an incline from roughly 125 to 430 and 20 to 105, while the former had close level with male workers and the letter experienced enormous climb by 400%. However, the number of female workers did not change in two sector (Public Sector Non Defence and Manufacturing) stable at around 650 and 30 severally between 1975 and 1995.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...of Freedonia male and female workers in thousand in six sectors between 1975 and 1995. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, moreover, regarding, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34285714286 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89750850828 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552380952381 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9067059001 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.25 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379892866657 0.215688989381 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186824552907 0.103423049105 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136418666939 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276614292374 0.15604864568 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146867767345 0.0819641961636 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.