The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age

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The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.

The comparison in the three different music albums sales among the British based on sex and age is displayed in bar charts, shown in percentage.
Overall, men buying the albums are more than women. Additionally, the lowest figure for sales according to cohorts was on classical music, except that for purchase in elderly.
As per data, there is the highest percentage of males purchasing rock music albums, with almost a third, followed by those who buy pop ones at more than a quarter. However, the rate of classical song albums sales accounts for a third of the former. Turning to females, that of pop and rock genre are moderately below 20%, then the rest is under one in ten.
When it comes to brackets, in pop and rock genre, the elderly and 35-44-year-old people are observed to below a fifth, while the rest cohorts stand out bigger to be approximately at 30%, except the elderly which makes up in about a tenth. Lastly, the oldest bracket shows the biggest proportion in classical songs at two in ten, followed by 25-34-year-old British at three-fourth of the former in this genre, and the other brackets are below a twentieth.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, lastly, so, then, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78172588832 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66659365855 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61421319797 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3778946663 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197222764371 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772676090085 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424329066951 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11808797691 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391201613796 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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