The diagram shows a summary of how hydro-electric power is generated. Overall, this process has two key stages: natural and artificial.
In the natural stage, the sun heat evaporates water from the sea. The water vapour then condenses and forms into clouds, which move inland and drop rain into the reservoir. The next stage is the artificial stage, when water from rainfall is stored in this area and kept by a dam, which contains a valve to open or close it. When the valve is released, the water flows to the turbine before moving to the pump station. At this point, the water is pumped back to the reservoir, which completes a small circular process.
When the water flows down from the reservoir, it spins the turbine and create electricity. Next, the power is transferred over high voltage cables to the transformer station, which converts the power into a voltage that is suitable for the electricity needs of the local area. Finally, the electricity is transmitted through cables under the ground to the schools, hospitals, factories and other facilities for the demand of domestic and industrial costumer.
In conclusion, the process involves various stages beginning from sea water through sophisticated procedures to produce electrical energy. It is interesting to note that hydro-electrical power generation creates no pollution and relies entirely on natural forces, consequently it is very environmentally friendly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, if, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1204.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2576419214 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93058977659 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589519650655 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.733012575 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198717799031 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786525922547 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119122973652 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160088653538 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983262509088 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.