The illustration shows information about how an igloo is built from snow

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The illustration shows information about how an igloo is built from snow.

The picture illustrates the process of making an igloo

Overall, there are five main stages in this process, starting with finding an area covered by hard-packed snow and ending with covering the entrance hole with snow blocks.

Firstly, after a hard-packed snow place is found. People use the saw snow to cut large snow blocks which have the ideal measures are 3, 8 and 15 inches for each dimension and they are used for the foundation of the igloo. The edges of the blocks are adjusted with the saw to fit each other and are set in a ring from bottom to up. Next, using a shovel to dig a hole under the wall to create an entrance, and a slightly oversized block is exactly sculptured and put on the top of the igloo.

Out of the remaining steps, overhangs of snow between the layers of blocks of the outside of the igloo are removed by a shovel and the gaps among them are filled by snow while the internal surface of the igloo is smoothed by hand. Any excess snow is shovelled out if remaining. In the final phase, a hole is dug in the shape of the entrance and it then covered with snow blocks to complete the igloo.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35545023697 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26260510579 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535545023697 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8626156757 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.875 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230678745697 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096782737253 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393439299039 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159648662469 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055296883439 0.0819641961636 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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