The line graph below shows the number of single-family homes constructed in the United States by region over a period of six years.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph presents the amount of construction of single- family homes in northeast,midwest,soth,and west of united states, during the time period from 2006 to 2012. Overall, the amount of construction of single-family homes in all regions of united states plummeted.
looking at the line representing new residental construction in south of united states there began much higher than other regions , with 900.000single-family homes in 2006.This number plunged by leaps and bounds to almost 300,000 single-family homes in 2010. However, the quantity of single family homes in south swlled to 350000 homes in the following two years.
As to the construction of midwest single family homes, it can be seen that it began at around just under 200,000 homes in 2006. In the subsequence six years, there was a considerable dwindle in the quantity of homes. This was rock bottom for the construction during the period presented.
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- The line graph below shows the number of single-family homes constructed in the United States by region over a period of six years.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , midwest
...ion of single- family homes in northeast,midwest,soth,and west of united states, during ...
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Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...- family homes in northeast,midwest,soth,and west of united states, during the time ...
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Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of united states, during the time period from 2006 to 2012. Overall, the amount o...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...gions of united states plummeted. looking at the line representing new residenta...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... looking at the line representing new residental construction in south of ...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ere began much higher than other regions , with 900.000single-family homes in 2006...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...with 900.000single-family homes in 2006.This number plunged by leaps and bounds to a...
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Line 9, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in the following two years. As to the construction of midwest single famil...
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Line 9, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... considerable dwindle in the quantity of homes. This was rock bottom for the cons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36054421769 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48087753308 2.65546596893 131% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6913831678 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.571428571 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32755418091 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158721228246 0.103423049105 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714724875129 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229057064176 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628583287278 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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