Line graph : Consumption of fast food by Australian teenagers.
The line graph exhibits the amount of consumption of fast food pizza , humbergers and fish and chips which were consumed by Australian teenagers from 1979 to 2000o.verall, consumption of pizza , fish and chips saw a surge ,while consumption of pizza slump over the period presented.
Regarding the consumption of fast food involoving pizza, consumption of pizza was massively more popular , beginning with 300 grams per week in 1970. This number then experienced asignificant plung,though, hitting 200 grams per week in 1990.
Turning to the consumption of fish and chips was higher than consumption of hamburgers, with nearly 80 grams per week in 1970. Before climbing significantly to 500 grams per week in 1990, the number of consumption of fish and chips dropped markedly to150 grams per week in 1980. Between 1970 and 1990 , there was anoticeable soared in the amount of consumption of fish and chips
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26712328767 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96860610762 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534246575342 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0705072826 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.166666667 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238961301618 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117811746912 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104810839299 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178234708206 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960232444444 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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